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Critiques
The out of focus areas 'bokeh' shows classically poor characteristics, with the outlines clearly visable it all loks rather crunchy and you might argue it was distracting. However I personally really like this, I think it creates a somewhat dreamy appearance to the image where a smoother background might have been a little too simple.
I am somewhat indifferent to the birds pose, whilst its quizzical nature comes through, at the same time, because of the lack of eye contact, I am not transfixed by it as a subject, but rather find myself enjoying the iamge as a whole.
My main criticism comes witht he birds separation from the background. The out of focus areas are excellent however the branch directly behind the birds head spoils the definiteion and outline of the bird. Were it not for this branch it really would be a brilliant image.
Alex
The blue sky in the background gives a nice pop of colour to an otherwise neutral palette.
The only detail that bothers me a little bit is the out of focus branch on the far right bottom corner. The rest of the branch is sharp and in focus all the way across except that part. I would say it is a good trade off for getting the focus you did though, if the branches were in focus in the background I think the photo would have looked much too busy.
You did a great job! Love the photo.
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